My Whacky Web Tale : The Haunted tower

This is a Whacky Web Tale I made from the site 'Whacky Web Tales'. The words that are in bold letters are what I wrote. It's kind of wierd but it's fun. Try it over here!

The Haunted Tower

One afternoon Jake and Ashley were walking down a(n) yummy trail, looking for kindling for their campfire. The trees were funny and green, and there were colorful wildflowers all around. Jake and Ashley began to pick the wildflowers, and after a while, they screammed so far that they had wandered away from the trail.

It started to get dark. Jake began to get worried, but Ashley seemed excited to have an adventure. “Look!” Ashley said. “Do you see that pizza? It looks like a house!”
“We're saved!” cried Jake, who was relieved.
Once they got closer, Jake felt very uneasy again. It didn't look like the cozy little cottage Jake had been imagining, but rather a big, spooky tower! It was about 3 feet tall, and it was covered with sky blue ivy and moss. It was the creepiest thing Jake had ever seen!
Jake said, “Ashley, let's keep walking! There's no way I'm going into that tower! It looks haunted!”
“Don't be such a(n) sushi! We're going in. I think it looks perfectly un-haunted!” said Ashley.
Jake was so scared that he could not open his eyes. He felt his fingers chatter as Ashley opened the door. All of a sudden, Jake felt that he was not alone. He opened his eyes, prepared to see the worst. But instead, he saw all his friends and family inside the haunted tower! “Surprise! Happy birthday, Jake!” they all cried.